This game is a rough diamond.

The structure of the chapters appears to be strangely out of order. Move descriptions often seems to be too ambiguous or even contradictory. Above all, there are too little actual play examples to make sense of all these complex rules. Sorry, your book needs serious editing.

Despite all that, I can recommend the game. The World of Legacy engine helps to create a living, breathing world. There are various exciting additions to the pbta formula. The fantasy setting is novel, interesting and atmospheric.

My advice: upload a transcript of a lengthy actual play example where all moves are used.